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whooo! This is my first english critique, so please be gentle with me and you may keep all my grammar and language mistakes. ^^
I really like this picture very much. Is has some sketchiness - and I love sketches - without looking really unfinished. I like especially the way you made his hair and the raw lines building the shadows of his neck.
Maybe the part under is chest is a little bit too thin, but it fits quite good with the perspective. The one thing I really don't like is that dark black line in the right part of his neck. It's clearly thereto show some shadow, but it's a little too thick to my eyes. I miss a background, but apart from that I don't have anything to critisize.