Sailor Jupiter

Everything looks good except the chest for me. I know she's a busty girl, but I think that her breasts could have used a little more smoothing maybe? As it is, they seem disjointed from the rest of the body. I don't know if it's perhaps that they're a little too big or too high or just that the brush strokes beneath her collarbone area little rough, but I think (given even just the rest of the image, which is superb) that you could really knock it out of the park if you fiddled with that some more.

Hope that helps!