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i forgot where'd i put the files and here we are, one of my watcher remind me of this old file , and probably would gonna finish this pieces and the morrigan.

was quite busy with my own game projects :)

edit : working on it for 10 minutes and make some major changes , pose updates
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Honestly, I think out of all your Tifa pieces, this one is the poorest. Your others are great, but the pose in this one is just skewed and you didn't create the foreshortening effect very well (of her top half being closer to the viewer than her bottom half).

Other than that, it's a great piece, but it's very awkward to look at, and Tifa looks like she's feeling kinda awkward too (including her shoulders, which look way too "hunched up" and in her face for that kind of pose).

Tifa honestly looks like she's cramped and sort of in pain. It's just a very awkward pose. I suggest that when doing poses like this that you don't quite have down yet, take a photo of yourself doing this pose (or use another model like a friend if that's easier) and then you can see what it actually looks like from that above view so you have something to work off of.

Or you can search online for these kinds of above poses. There are /hundreds/ of references out there, I'm sure you could find at least -one- that would help.

This drawing is great, but it's just the awkwardness of looking at this pose that's bringing it down in quality. Get some references, or make some your own if you have to, and practice practice practice. Above views can be challenging, but once you get them down, your drawings will look so much more dynamic and pleasing to the eye :)

Other than that, great job. Keep up the awesome work!

- Uzuki Cheverie
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Overall a great start, and I have some hopefully helpful thoughts to contribute:

As mentioned in the other critique, the pose looks very compact and awkward- i think the main cause for that is the canvas-right arm and hand, it's coming too far forward onto her abdominal/hip area. Moving the hand/forearm to the canvas right a little might improve things!

My other big thing that I noticed, is that I feel her face is too wide-set. Like, the features are spread out too far. I'm not entirely sure how much to move them all in by, but it might be worth examining.

Other than that I look forward to seeing the continuation of this piece or one like it in the future.
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mohamednaruto0 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggood jop i liked this
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EwelinaMalke Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Another good one! Love it. :heart:
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:icondameodessa:
DameOdessa Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
She is SO gorgeous:love:
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:iconwanderer619:
Wanderer619 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
Awsome!
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YourFriskyMama Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
What do you use to draw with? Like on the computer
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ooOEileenOoo Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
Wooooow I love it!!!!!:yay:
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:iconedu-nizama:
Edu-Nizama Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Muy bueno.
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:icongriddark:
griddark Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
love the facial expression, and the body language, keep it up :)
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:iconihootie:
iHootie Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
Cuteee.
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:icontraumeriin:
Traumeriin Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The face is really amazing... Love it !
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:icondigimanbyte:
Digimanbyte Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Truly magnificent, the colour and drawing technique certainly make her pop out, love how her pose brings out a more feminine strong sexually appealing nature to her while also displaying her strength. Absolutely wonderful work the shading and colour coordination. Great job.
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magikdarah Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
You changed the color of the eye~ :O trying something new?
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FoulSpartan Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Loving the face!
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Alcetore Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
giggity
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:iconsouthpawper:
southpawper Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You really like Tifa!  It seems you're constantly drawing her?^^;
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:icontatoonthesky:
Tatoonthesky Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Own, great painting!
Can I use it as a reference? *----------------------*
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OPStrawhat Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWESOME!!! :D
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Tilebus7 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
Great Tifa. Definitely had to like ya page. :D
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ragintrollkol9000 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
:iconclappingplz::iconbravoplz:
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2blind2draw Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
her arms are perfectly fine, pose is stable. enjoyable to the eye. thumbs up chap
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:iconteabound:
teabound Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Sexy!OMG 
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013   Digital Artist
Her arms look very awkward.><
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seolxnguyen Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Agreed, her left arm (our right) seems to be laying on her...stomach? It is kind of awkward..
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:iconamalaazula:
AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013   Digital Artist
Yes, it seems so. If her left hand would be at her waist, I think it'd look natural.
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ThaliaAnderson Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
+1 to this comment.

It's a great painting, though--that one hand is the only thing that looks out of place. (:
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Overweight-Cat Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student General Artist
thanks for you guys feedback ! would fix / change things up later :)
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Anadia-Chan Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Curious, do you ever do speed painting videos or anything??
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RecklessRob Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Wow, super hot and cute.
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PrinceCiel Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Why so much tifa?
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WastedCrayon Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
~WOW~
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mew318 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
amazing!! :D
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:iconscope001:
scope001 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nice!
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SallyWally30 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist
Beautiful :)
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nightmareonmystreet Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*q*
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HectorMcreyes Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful....=3
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HellknightLeon Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Looks awesome cant wait to see another picture of Tifa from you. 
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KaineHillPhotography Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
First of all: I like it! But I also have some critique which I hope helps you. :)

I think the pose is a little awkward. Her left hand should be more on her hip bone than on her belly. Also her thigh becomes as thin as her arms, maybe even a little thinner which is weird even for anime/game anatomy. Oh, and if you look at some naked women or in short skirts you'll see that the inner thigh is not flat but also rounds a little, even on skinny people.
I can't really tell if the hair is supposed to be in front of her right arm or behind it. If it is in front it falls kind of unnatural but if it's in the back & doesn't cover up the arm then the arm is really thin compared to the left one.

I hope this helps!
To the face: It's absolutely loverly, I like it a lot. The flow of the upper lid is beautifully done and her lips look feminine but not overly pink-ish or too big like some sort of a rubber boat. :D Very nice!
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TheDoorWithin Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why not put this in an actual critique? Lol it seems quite helpful!
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KaineHillPhotography Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I tried but my computer won't let me enter anything in the critique Text Box. No idea why. :/
I'm glad it's helpful though! ;)
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TheDoorWithin Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww...
Still is helpful. Hopefully the artist will see it.
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Nicole99 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Wohoh,i luv it!
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Minidarkcalibur89 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Nice !
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PhantomHourglass Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Nice job :)
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:iconalyonheart:
alyonheart Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Love it !
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ILikeCommas Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Woohoo! More Tifa!
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:icondesmondlogan:
desmondlogan Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
incredible work
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herofan135 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Looks amazing so far, love the perspective and her flowing hair!
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:iconvenegal:
Venegal Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Oh the Japanese, and their constant concept of female characters with giant boobs...what an irony.
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FreakshowAutrael Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student General Artist
can't wait to see it finish
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eirol87 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very nicely done, the shading is superb in every way and the expression on the subject is quite capturing! the shadow effect on the body is impressively depicted! very nice job! ^^
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