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Tifa WIP by Overweight-Cat Tifa WIP by Overweight-Cat
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i forgot where'd i put the files and here we are, one of my watcher remind me of this old file , and probably would gonna finish this pieces and the morrigan.

was quite busy with my own game projects :)

edit : working on it for 10 minutes and make some major changes , pose updates
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Honestly, I think out of all your Tifa pieces, this one is the poorest. Your others are great, but the pose in this one is just skewed and you didn't create the foreshortening effect very well (of her top half being closer to the viewer than her bottom half).

Other than that, it's a great piece, but it's very awkward to look at, and Tifa looks like she's feeling kinda awkward too (including her shoulders, which look way too "hunched up" and in her face for that kind of pose).

Tifa honestly looks like she's cramped and sort of in pain. It's just a very awkward pose. I suggest that when doing poses like this that you don't quite have down yet, take a photo of yourself doing this pose (or use another model like a friend if that's easier) and then you can see what it actually looks like from that above view so you have something to work off of.

Or you can search online for these kinds of above poses. There are /hundreds/ of references out there, I'm sure you could find at least -one- that would help.

This drawing is great, but it's just the awkwardness of looking at this pose that's bringing it down in quality. Get some references, or make some your own if you have to, and practice practice practice. Above views can be challenging, but once you get them down, your drawings will look so much more dynamic and pleasing to the eye :)

Other than that, great job. Keep up the awesome work!

- Uzuki Cheverie
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Overall a great start, and I have some hopefully helpful thoughts to contribute:

As mentioned in the other critique, the pose looks very compact and awkward- i think the main cause for that is the canvas-right arm and hand, it's coming too far forward onto her abdominal/hip area. Moving the hand/forearm to the canvas right a little might improve things!

My other big thing that I noticed, is that I feel her face is too wide-set. Like, the features are spread out too far. I'm not entirely sure how much to move them all in by, but it might be worth examining.

Other than that I look forward to seeing the continuation of this piece or one like it in the future.
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mohamednaruto0 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggood jop i liked this
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EwelinaMalke Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Another good one! Love it. :heart:
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
She is SO gorgeous:love:
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Wanderer619 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
Awsome!
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YourFriskyMama Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
What do you use to draw with? Like on the computer
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ooOEileenOoo Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
Wooooow I love it!!!!!:yay:
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Edu-Nizama Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Muy bueno.
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griddark Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
love the facial expression, and the body language, keep it up :)
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iHootie Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
Cuteee.
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Traumeriin Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The face is really amazing... Love it !
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